A PASTOR'S POST-CHRISTMAS LAMENT

A quick exercise in descriptive language

I'm always trying to improve as a writer. I just finished a course on using descriptive language in creative non-fiction. The following paragraph is an example. I'd love your feedback on what it stirs in you. It is not based on actual events, but it sure could be.

Thanks!

[A PASTOR'S POST-CHRISTMAS LAMENT]

The only remnant of our Advent anticipation is Sil…